From 6d31501275b951597f131da9828e8d16cce39db0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Zooko O'Whielacronx <zooko@zooko.com>
Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2009 09:04:14 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] docs: some small edits to install.html

---
 docs/install.html | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/install.html b/docs/install.html
index bf7f2ce0..cf088e37 100644
--- a/docs/install.html
+++ b/docs/install.html
@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@
 
   <body>
     <h1>About Tahoe</h1>
-    <p>Welcome to <a href="http://allmydata.org">the Tahoe project</a>, a secure, decentralized, fault-tolerant filesystem.</p>
-    <p>See <a href="about.html">the about page</a> for more information.
+    <p>Welcome to <a href="http://allmydata.org">the Tahoe project</a>, a secure, decentralized, fault-tolerant filesystem. <a href="about.html">About Tahoe.</a>
 
     <h1>
     <h1>How To Install Tahoe</h1>
@@ -36,9 +35,9 @@
 
     <p>Run <cite>python setup.py build</cite> to install the <cite>tahoe</cite> executable into a subdirectory of the current directory named <cite>bin</cite>.</p>
 
-    <p>Optionally run <cite>python setup.py test</cite> to verify that it passes tests.</p>
+    <p>(Optionally run <cite>python setup.py test</cite> to verify that it passes all of its self-tests.)</p>
 
-    <p>Run <cite>bin/tahoe --version</cite> to verify that the executable tool runs and prints out the right version number.</p>
+    <p>Run <cite>bin/tahoe --version</cite> to verify that the executable tool prints out the right version number.</p>
 
     <h2>Run</h2>
 
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