From: Zooko O'Whielacronx <zooko@zooko.com>
Date: Thu, 19 Apr 2007 21:11:00 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: relnotes.txt: English usage
X-Git-Tag: tahoe_v0.1.0-0-UNSTABLE~38
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relnotes.txt: English usage
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diff --git a/relnotes.txt b/relnotes.txt
index 30ff38f7..78eeac13 100644
--- a/relnotes.txt
+++ b/relnotes.txt
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@ XYZ Brian: please insert intro to UI
 
 Hacking and Community
 
-Please join our mailing list [4] and to discuss the ideas behind Tahoe and
+Please join the mailing list [4] and to discuss the ideas behind Tahoe and
 extensions of and uses of Tahoe.  Patches that extend and improve Tahoe are
 gratefully accepted -- roadmap.txt [5] shows the next improvements that we
 plan to make.  You can browse the revision control history, source code, and
-issue tracking at our Trac instance [6].  Please note the buildbot results
+issue tracking at the Trac instance [6].  Please note the buildbot results
 page [7], which show how Tahoe builds and passes unit tests on each checkin,
 and the code coverage results [8] and percentage-covered graph [9], which
 show how much of the Tahoe source code is currently exercised the test suite.
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ consumer backup service, written in Python.
 
 It uses the Foolscap library [10] which provides a remote object protocol
 inspired by the capability-secure "E" programming language [11].  Foolscap
-allows us to express the intended behavior of our distributed mesh directly
+allows us to express the intended behavior of the distributed mesh directly
 in object-oriented terms while relying on a well-engineered, secure transport
 layer.