From: Zooko O'Whielacronx <zooko@zooko.com>
Date: Wed, 27 Feb 2008 16:01:38 +0000 (-0700)
Subject: docs: about.html: a couple of edits suggested by kpreid's comments
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     <p><a href="http://allmydata.org">http://allmydata.org</a></p>
 
     <h2>Overview</h2>
-    <p>A "storage grid" is made up of a number of storage servers.  A storage server has local attached storage (typically one or more SATA hard disks).  A "gateway" uses the storage servers and provides to its clients a filesystem over a standard protocol such as HTTP(S), FUSE, or SMB.</p>
+    <p>A "storage grid" is made up of a number of storage servers.  A storage server has local attached storage (typically one or more hard disks).  A "gateway" uses the storage servers and provides to its clients a filesystem over a standard protocol such as HTTP(S), FUSE, or SMB.</p>
     <p>Users do not rely on storage servers to provide <i>confidentiality</i> nor <i>integrity</i> for the data -- instead all of the data is encrypted and integrity-checked by the gateway, so that the servers can neither read nor alter the contents of the files.</p>
     <p>Users do rely on storage servers for <i>availability</i>.  The ciphertext is erasure-coded and distributed across <cite>N</cite> storage servers (the default value for <cite>N</cite> is 10) so that it can be recovered from any <cite>K</cite> of these servers (the default value of <cite>K</cite> is 3).  Therefore only the simultaneous failure of <cite>N-K+1</cite> (with the defaults, 8) servers can make the data unavailable.  Phrasing this in terms of <i>reliance</i>, we say that the users <i>rely on</i> the gateway for the confidentiality and integrity of the data, and on any 3 of the 10 servers for the availability of the data.</p>
     <p>In the typical deployment mode each user runs her own gateway on her own machine.  This way she relies on only her own machine for the confidentiality and integrity of the data, and she can take advantage of filesystem integration using FUSE or SMB.</p>
     <p>An alternate deployment mode is that the gateway runs on a remote machine and the user connects to it over HTTPS.  This means that the operator of the gateway can view and modify the user's data (the user <i>relies on</i> the gateway for confidentiality and integrity), but the user can access the filesystem with a client that doesn't have the gateway software installed, such as an Internet kiosk or cell phone.</p>
-    <p>A user who has read-write access to a file or directory in this filesystem can give another user read-write access to that file or directory, or read-only access to that file or directory.  A user who has read-only access to a file or directory can give another user read-only access to it.</p>
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+    <h2>Access control</h2>
+    <p>There are two kinds of files: immutable and mutable.  Immutable files have the property that once they have been uploaded to the storage grid they can't be modified.  Mutable ones can be modified.  A user can have read-write access to a mutable file or read-only access to it (or no access to it at all).</p>
+    <p>A user who has read-write access to a mutable file or directory can give another user read-write access to that file or directory, or read-only access to that file or directory.  A user who has read-only access to a file or directory can give another user read-only access to it.</p>
     <p>When linking a file or directory into a parent directory, you can use a read-write link or a read-only link.  If you use a read-write link, then anyone who has read-write access to the parent directory can gain read-write access to the child, and anyone who has read-only access to the parent directory can gain read-only access to the child.  If you use a read-only link, then anyone who has either read-write or read-only access to the parent directory can gain read-only access to the child.</p>
-    <p>There are two kinds of files: immutable and mutable.  Immutable files have the property that once they have been uploaded to the storage grid they can't be modified.  Mutable ones can be modified.</p>
     <p>For more technical detail, please see <a href="architecture.txt">architecture.txt</a>, the <a href="http://allmydata.org/trac/tahoe/wiki/Doc">The Doc Page</a> on the Wiki, and the other files in the <a href="."><cite>docs</cite></a> directory of the source tree.</p>
 
     <h2>Installing</h2>