From bec0787b6ea545f80092c4ef4db1437d3dccbf2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Daira Hopwood <daira@jacaranda.org>
Date: Fri, 29 May 2015 00:14:59 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Clarify wording.

Signed-off-by: Daira Hopwood <daira@jacaranda.org>
---
 docs/proposed/magic-folder/remote-to-local-sync.rst | 7 ++++---
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/proposed/magic-folder/remote-to-local-sync.rst b/docs/proposed/magic-folder/remote-to-local-sync.rst
index e185c509..c531ea35 100644
--- a/docs/proposed/magic-folder/remote-to-local-sync.rst
+++ b/docs/proposed/magic-folder/remote-to-local-sync.rst
@@ -696,9 +696,10 @@ field is omitted.
 
 Note that ``last_downloaded_uri`` field does *not* record the URI of
 the uploaded file (which would be redundant); it records the URI of
-the last download before the change that caused the upload. The field
-will be absent if the file has only ever been changed by the client
-that first created it.
+the last download before the local change that caused the upload.
+The field will be absent if the file has never been downloaded by
+this client (i.e. if it was created on this client and no change
+by any other client has been detected).
 
 A possible refinement also takes into account the
 ``last_downloaded_timestamp`` field from the magic folder db, and
-- 
2.45.2